The mother
Im so proud of Morris he is only 13 years and he already published a comic strip in a local magazine, then he will publish in a most famous magazine. Im so excited I will buy something to show how proud I am of him.
Im so happy, and I think that he is more happy than me he had lot of ilussions for the future he think that he will be famous and millionaire, that he could buy everything that he wants, go to any part of the world travelling aal the tieme.
I think that hre is very imaginative writing comics, but also he is very fancifull when thing about what could happen to him, for example when think he will be millionaire .But I think that if he had lot of money, he will lend my some because Im his mother.
Santi: Be careful when you type. The mistakes on the title make your work look sloppy.
ResponderEliminarThe last paragraph doesn´t sound very much like the mother. There´s no evidence in the story that she is interested in money. I wouldn´t include that.
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